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    a short story

    here,s a short story i wrote this afternoon ,i hope you all enjoy.

    interior:nightime.




    night-time: a pale blue moonlight shining through the window lighting up a couple asleep.

    bed start’s to vibrate.
    John,s eye,s are going into REM and he start’s to twitch back on the right side of the bed on his back,one arm arched above his head.
    his partner Mary is curled up on the on the left side.




    A faint green line that resembles a large rugby ball take’s form.
    A portal is opening.
    John seems uncomfortable in his sleep and tosses and turn’s .
    Mary seems fast asleep and comfortable.

    The portal has opened revealing stars through the bedroom wall.
    Three shadowery figures step through into the bedroom and stand at the foot of the bed.
    Two look human and the other looks alien.

    The alien grunts giving a scowl at the sleeping John.
    The alien is known as Granth,
    the two humans are Marek and Clisp
    “wait Granth” say,s Marek “he will not remember”

    Clisp take’s a device from her side and points it at Mary scanning her.
    “This one will sleep and not awake tonight” she state,s.
    She then points it at John and scan,s him.
    “shall we” she looks at the others and they nod in unision.
    Clisp activates a switch on her handheld device and Johns body starts to vibrate.
    John’s body seems to go into spasms ,then there is a pop and John sits up in bed.
    The three look amused.
    John looks at the three with wide eye’s trying to gather his surroundings.

    Granth give’s him a snarl .
    “you owe me Telon” Granth say,s
    “wait i already said he will not remember”states Marek.
    Granth grunt,s.
    “ he,s up may take a minute for his senses to kick in” says Clisp

    John look’s at the three in disbelieve and bends his head to one side peering at the portal and the stars behind that should have been his bedroom wall.he looks over at Mary who seems sound asleep.
    “WUT,WUT,whoa,what a dream” John.
    “no dream Telon and you owe me five Lasps”Granth

    All three look and observe John.

    “it took a long time to find you Telon”Marek with a smile.
    “i,i...i do not know what you are talking about,i...i ..know no Telon”John.
    Granth grunt,s.

    “how long for recall”Marek looking at Clisp.

    “maybe five ten minute’s but we do not have much time” Clisp.
    “how long do we have” Marek
    “maybe thirty earthtime minutes at most “Clisp
    “ok lets see if we can get through”Marek
    Marek looks to John and asks him his name.
    John answers in disbelieve”John...John”
    “Telon” exclaims Granth
    “hush” Marek commands.

    Clisp walk,s around the side of the bed and looks at Mary.
    “she’s pretty” she says with a smile.

    “John i want you to take a look around the room” says marek.
    John looks around the room and sees his bedroom as it is apart from a gaping hole in the wall and three beings stood around him,he looks at at Mary fast asleep then back at Marek.
    “now stand up”Marek

    John stands up in his pyjamas facing the three knowing it is a dream.
    “hey,hey this is the wildest dream i have had” he laughs.
    “turn around John”Marek says.

    John turns around to see himself still asleep with his partner Mary.
    “Wut...WTF...”John panicking.

    “wait let us explain”Clisp.

    “John...this is you now lying in that bed,only that person is not you if you understand?”
    “what do you mean”John.
    Clisp smiles...
    ”John we lost you and it took us many of your years to find you again”
    “hopefully your memory will have recall as we try to enhance your memory”
    “do you not feel lighter than the body that sleeps in that bed now?”
    “are you not more aware and perceptive to your surroundings?”.

    John looks around then at his arms and hands and sees a faint glow.

    “the 3d physical body is heavy and has so much negative information taught to it that it has become a addiction unto itself”....”what you know of self and being is only a heartbeat away but you are walled up to this through the education and control of this 3d planet”.
    “it is a heavy planet and we cannot stay here long”Marek.
    “John you are really Telon and you fought for the resistance against the dark side,we are your comrades and have missed you dearly,your one craft fighter took a hit where it tumbled into this region of the galactic universe. You would have died in that ship but your soul would have been re incarnated on this planet you call earth”
    “the only issue with earth is that it is not part of the galactic movement and has been chosen for freewill,although we may think there is a race here controlling the population,we cannot interfere”
    “it is not our sector to operate in”.
    “so you where born on this planet and had all your past memory,s erased.”
    “you are now known as John,living a life with no meaning”
    “we have broke protocol to be here Telon,we are your friends and we miss you”
    “the fight continues for the souls and you where once a commander of that fight”.

    “we have come to remind you of who you really are”..

    John closes his eyes and flashes of memorys start to invade his mind.
    Himself alone in his fighter craft communicating with Marek,Clisp and Granth giving orders to take out the opposition.
    He remembers betting Granth a lifetime holiday on a planet of relaxation and recuperation.
    These holidays are not easy to come by and can take many lifetimes to aquire one.
    He now know,s why Granth is ****ed off with him.
    Only Telon can sign off this vacation,only he was reborn with no memory of who he really is.
    As full memory starts to come back to Telon he asks
    “what about Mary and our relationship here and now?
    “we have to leave soon Telon and a lot is at stake, you will be helping Mary and humankind in your fight for right, otherwise earth will be consumed also” Marek.
    Telon looks back at Mary one last time and leaves through the portal.

    Mary awakes with the sun on her face smiling and reaches out to John.
    Johns body is cold.

    Telon rejoins the fight knowing one day he will be reunited with Mary.

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    experience base, pure fantasy or a mix?

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    Quote Originally posted by jimmer View Post
    experience base, pure fantasy or a mix?
    i would like to believe a mix,but many in this 3d realm would see it as fantasy.
    there is a war going on through the dimensions that has many levels,our level is one of the lowest.
    not the lowest but one of them.

    this war is inter dimensional and the goal is the soul.

    mankind has forgot his own goal and is on the road to certain ruin,in this 3d plane.
    the programmer that we are controlled by has it,s own agenda at hand.

    our personal goal is to return to source.

    this will take many lifetimes in many different forms on different planets to accomplish.

    one could accomplish it here on earth another on another planet,it is all about your own personal learning and where you are at.

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    I would have preferred a happier ending ronin, like Mary being one of them too and all of them leaving together . . .
    Is there a Part 2?

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    when i was writing this i actually thought of changing John to Mary because of the obvious reply.
    it does not really matter who the main character is ,whether it be male or female.
    what does matter is that some are awakened to their true state of being and realise that for the good of all that they have a mission and a fight to fight.

    i probably never expressed it properly but the love for Mary from John was universal and the sacrifice to fight was more important in the scheme of things,although he knew in his astral body that they would be reunited some day no matter how ever long it takes.

    thanks for the interest.

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